My novel

I have started writing again. Does anyone recall a novel-in-progress I dubbed "Twenty Four?" I have decided to rewrite it- it is only four chapters, fyi. I am reading over it while I write this post and it isn't too bad. Some places would need some touching up to make them better, but I'm restarting. I just have to rephrase it, in a way, for my rewrite, and change a few (major) details. If anyone wants to read a part of my story- the original or the rewrite once I get it underway- please let me know and I'll gladly post it. I'm currently 607 words into the rewrite, while there are...over 4,300 words in the original so far.