Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Angel's Massacre(my scary story)

The angel of death stood proudly over its sullen battleground. The uneven rows were a testament to its success and glory. Yes, the Master would be pleased. Tonight, the soldiers of light would fall into eternal darkness.
A stone shroud, wearied by the ages, covered the angel, who looked with disdain at the humans mingling in the shadowy curtains of the dead. The humans had given it a face and a shrouded body. It must be thankful, for although it was the Eternal Silence it would soon be silent no longer. A mere three thousand more soldiers of death were needed to rise from the shadows. It had waited many centuries; it could linger a few more.
It knew its mission on earth; the Master would never let it forget. Sixty thousand converts, soldiers of death, must be gathered, for the Master to reign over the light. Converts from all over the city were already doing his bidding: three thousand more must die.
Dusk fell over the realm of the angel. A whirlwind of the dead rose from beneath the ground, and any human left in the cemetery was fair game for their wrath. The angel rejoiced in these deaths. It was, after all, the sole reason of its faltering existence: to kill.
Gathered before the angel were its armies, its precious soldiers. It had sacrificed for these spirits everything the Master had given it. Losing them would mean centuries more of this existence, surrounded by ungrateful humans just out of reach of its powerful fingers, death’s own powerful fingers. An existence of fulfillment, of torture, of death. Of itself.
It looked out with haunting, expressionless eyes. Only those upon which death had acted could notice the hatred burning among the cold, smooth, stone. These dead could see it. They understood what it meant. Tonight was the night of the massacre- the destinies of three thousand worthless lives would be fulfilled. The dead were thirsty for company.
The streets of the city were wisely emptied of all humans. All the better for the dead. Their cloaked figures slithered, more than mere shadows. That night, the eve of October thirty-first, the sky became a pure black mob of swarming spirits, a mob of death. Silent screams spread through the city, and a river of mauve blood erupted in the midst of the newly killed. In the cemetery, the angel of death cackled cruelly, happily, to the Master as the presence of souls grew. New recruits appeared before it, gliding off to kill. An air of death spread over the city, an ebony cloud of horror and doom.
Children writhed in their beds as life was sucked out of them, thrashing until their last ragged breaths and their feeble souls rose from their bodies and materialized into horrid spirits.
Bloodless murder whispered through the trees and the buildings of the city. It echoed through the alleys filled with ghosts eager for revenge. Death was hidden behind every corner, every lamp post, every street sign. There was nowhere the tormenting armies could not go. Their power was great, their Master was great, and their vile deeds loomed above the unsuspecting city. The moon, paled with the horror of what it witnessed, waxed and waned, its eyes closed in an evocative gaze.
The angel did not have to wait long. Before the twentieth moan of the moon all the vast reaches of death were gathered before it again. As the Master had wished, sixty thousand soldiers floated in ranks before his servant, the angel. Deep, booming thunder, the voice of the Master, sounded throughout the city.
Finally, after five long centuries, the armies of eternal darkness were ready. The angel had fulfilled its duty.
As the angel watched, the armies of darkness, the puppets of the Master, rose into the sky, ebony clouds that blocked the feeble light of the horrified and helpless moon. They descended into the city under its watchful eyes. As the first lights of dawn approached, the Eternal Silence broke away from its marble base and ascended into the air, casting one long, last look at Chicago and the Graceland Cemetery.


Friday, October 23, 2009

The Great Chicago Ghost Story Contest


I'm entering it. My story is about "Eternal Silence," the statue above, found in Graceland Cemetery. It is also called the statue of death.It is untitled but I really like it. To learn more, visit http://www.chicagotribune.com/features/halloween/
UPDATE: The title is "Angel's Massacre."

Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Young Authors

Today our teacher told us we had to do Young Authors in school(you have to write a story and draw illustrations and bind it somehow into a book), and of course, I rejoiced. For the past two years I have one my class competition and last year even won the school-wide one for my level, and my poems went on the regional one, where they lost. This year I am hoping to win class again, and everyone who sat by me when our teacher was explaining kept saying that I was going to win. I just shrugged and said I hope so. Anyhoo, how does this idea sound......a story about a land of reflections and a girl's desperate struggle to escape. It will become more elaborate and I might even add another girl, in our regular world, whose survival is based on that of the girl in the mirror(land of reflections). Maybe the normal girl sees this other one in the mirror, begging for help? I don't know. I'm planning to start the story with: In the west, the sun was rising.
I might even develop it into an actual full length novel later on, that was my actual plan but I like the idea for this short story.
Thanks for reading

Saturday, October 17, 2009

Thanks SOOOO much Mimi!!!

Last night I e-mailed Mimi(my BFF and fellow Blogger) the first chapter of Twenty Four (my current novel). I was NOT expecting the kind of reaction I got, at all! Instead of the standard, "yah, it's great, sure, it's ok" routine I'd been expecting I saw countless, endless praise. (OMG! It sounds like it was written by a well-experienced author! Kiki! Better than Agatha Christie{my edit: it's not that good, but I can see the comparison}! So suspenseful and {another one of my edits: this is my favorite part, what comes next} page scrolling!)
I swear I nearly fainted. Ok, maybe not fainted but that lavish praise definetely inspired me. Now I just can't wait to see some of Mimi's own book. A newer update about her book is here.
Anyhoo (I love saying that... so catchy! Like "coinky dink." It's a BFF thing), if any of my followers/ readers want to see some of the first chapter, I'll consider posting some(or all) of it. Just leave a comment or send me a line(ha ha.. email me) at urbanbirding202@gmail.com.

Friday, October 16, 2009

What!!! I Got an F in Science!!! NOOOOOOO

NOOOOO!! Wails of total and complete despair echoe throughout the house. NOOOO!!! Sobs and faltering words whisper in the stove and the refridgerator until every can of jam and peanut butter knows the horrible, saddening news. I GOT AN F IN SCIENCE!!!! The final, horrific statement is heard bouncing through houses and trees until it reaches the sliding doors of Walgreens and slips inside with the unwary customer. It sneaks into the radio playing loudly, then proclaims itself to the few cloth-ladden bundles that are shoppers over the intercom. It sneaks into their warm ears and travels home with them, then repeats itself to the newscaster going to WGN News at Nine Broadcast. It is then proclaimed across the entire city, reaching the final, hidden nooks and cracks in the city's history and peoples and hiding itself for future generations to hear. It burrows into the sand at the beach, and escapes into Lake Michigan. It flows through the Great Lakes and escapes into the ocean. Within days the entire world will know that I got a failing grade in science.
At least I still have an A for the final grade. :)

Thursday, October 15, 2009

On Giant Hamster Wheels, and Help Needed for BFF

Yesterday I ran 120 feet at a rate of 4.5 feet per second. Sound impossible? It's not. All you have to do is 1) miraculously find yourself in Chicago and with tickets or a pass to the incredibly awesome Museum of Science and Industry and 2) manage to get their during open hours and then into the new You! exhibit. All there is to it. Plus you just have to find the giant orange hamster wheel. It's hard to miss. You'll find it.
My BFF Mimi needs some help with her book. Go here to see her post and leave a comment. Here's the synopsis:
"A man whose name was Arthyr Bradley is murdered in his own home in San Diego, California. The FBI are shocked to see that there are no clues which could lead to the culprit. But there is one tiny piece of evidence found outside the man's home, a notebook. In this notebook are the names of 150 people, who have no significant importance at this point. Agent John Lamar is caught in a race against time to find out who the people are and if they would be in any danger, because Arthur Bradley name had been the first name in the notebook and had been crossed out. Will the murderer be caught? Can Agent Lamar find all the 149 people left in the notebook before something happens?"

I think its a GREAT plot so please check it out.

Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Twenty Four: Prologue

The countdown has begun. Twenty four hours till the end of the world. In less than a day the earth would be annihilated. And only Jay knows about it. Seconds are ticking. Time is flying. The madness must be stopped.

Jay LeBord had stumbled upon a secret meeting of the elite planners. A secret society that only a chosen few knew existed. Jay had hid, unnoticed, in the shadows of the middle school attic. He hadn’t really cared about the men he saw gathered before him. He hadn’t understood the true meaning of the congregation. At least, not until two words had caught his attention. Two nearly silent, deadly words. Mass murder. Three equally lethal words followed. Destroy the earth. The rest was clear in his mind. How the gray-haired man with a hunched back and blue eyes had stood up and explained the plan, step-by-step. How the group had burned stacks of diagrams and maps. How, after the others had disassembled and filed out one by one, disguised as teachers, the leader had stayed back. How the sinister man had nearly discovered Jay hiding in a shadowy corner of discarded chalkboards and computers.

Yes, he remembered that evening clearly. He knew that in a matter of seconds, a set of highly destructive nuclear and atomic missiles would be released from their age-old lairs and launched into space. Even the president was too lowly to control these missiles, these toys of destruction. A single one could obliterate half of the Northern Hemisphere. When twenty four were in play, the consequences were much more fatal.

Only one person had the power to launch these murder weapons. For decades, as the man in power had changed, the missiles had stayed safely hidden and unused. A single, insane person now rules the elite group. And a single person is all it takes to destruction.

Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Twenty Four

Twenty Four is a novel I am currently working on. That may or may not be the final title, but at the moment it seems like a good fit.

Synopsis: Jay LeBord has stumbled upon a secret meeting of elite planners, who plot to annihilate the world. They launch highly secretive missiles that will make contact in twenty four hours. And Jay is the only outsider who knows of this plan. Now Jay must track down the insane planner of the attack and find a way to stop the missiles headed towards the earth before it’s too late. Seconds are ticking. Time is flying. The madness must be stopped.

As you may remember it was on that list of 5 novel ideas that I asked about. Mostly everone liked it and its one of my favorites so its my top priority, followed by the ancient monster thing. If you want to see that post again, it can be found here.
Later on I will post the prologue of the story, so far I'm liking it. I have an idea to alternate chapters between Jay's point of view and the bad guy's, but it is in third person. How does that sound? I'm not sure whether it will work out for me or for the story yet, I'm on the first chapter only.

Monday, October 12, 2009

The Silver Knife

    The girl emerged from the store at three o’clock in the afternoon. Making her way across the emptied parking lot to her car, she unlocked the door and stepped in. When she was buckled herself into the driver’s seat she looked up- and saw a man in the car next to hers staring at her intently. With piercing, emerald green eyes and an untidy mop of lively brown hair the man’s gaze never wavered. She smiled broadly at him, waving a hello. He grinned evilly back, pulled out a knife and began to smooth it against his skin, caressing his face, all the while looking absorbedly at the girl, his eyes following her every move. He continued to stroke his face with his knife. With a cry the girl turned away and started her motor. She heard a loud rumble. The man had started his car too. Shrieking once she pulled away and sped off, only to be followed by the man. In his black sedan he was catching up to her old car fast. Glancing in the rearview mirror she saw him, leaning forward, staring at her car. Pulling out her cell phone, the girl dialed nine-one-one, only to realize that her phone didn’t work. She began to sob wildly, throwing glances behind her, her screams bouncing against the windshield and echoing back to her frightened figure. The man was coming closer and closer, knife in hand, staring at her flustered, terrified face in glee.


Shrieking, she swerved her car away as the man pulled up alongside her. He opened his window, and she could hear maniacal laughter. Glancing violently around her car, the girl could not spot a single person other than the lunatic following her. Her face was slick with tears as she stepped on the gas. Her tank was almost empty. She had to turn back to town; maybe someone would notice her.

Her tires screeching, the girl made an abrupt about face and slammed head first into the man’s shiny black sedan. Putting her car in reverse she zoomed backwards. Her head spinning, the girl crashed into a huge oak tree that broke where she hit it. It fell, slamming down onto her car and crushing it. With a scream she squeezed out of her broken window and ran for her life. She sped into the forest, hoping to lose the kleptomaniac pursuing her. Somehow the man managed to see her in the dim light of the forest. She barely heard his footsteps behind her before she felt an arm around her neck, stopping her short. The same laughter that she had heard earlier now reached her worn, bleeding ears. The man held his knife up to her face, a violently gleeful smile on his face as he brought it closer and closer.

Screaming bloody murder, the girl fought the man. Slamming her fist into his face, she managed to break free. She began to run again, ignoring the pain in her head, ignoring the pain in her side, ignoring the pain she felt in every inch of her tired, hurt body. She tried not to pay attention to the thudding footsteps behind her, or the blood pouring down her face, into her mouth, leaving a crimson trail for the man to follow. Mustering one final scream the girl pushed a branch out of her way. It smacked the man in the face, breaking his nose, giving the girl an extra second. His nose spewing blood, he got up and kept running after her wounded figure.

As she slipped through two trees the girl heard a scream of pure terror bouncing through the forest. Turning around for a brief second she glimpsed the man, wrapped in a ghostly net which no human knife can cut. He was thrashing madly, yelling until silver tendrils wrapped themselves around his tongue, his bloody mouth, silencing him forever. The girl knew she was safe, safe from this mad lunatic… until the same net was hurled onto her body, wrapping tighter and tighter. She screamed, struggling, but the net held her tight. A ghostly man appeared, hovering a foot above her mangled body. Crying, she shrieked a plea to the spirit, who laughed the same evil laugh as the man with the knife. Holding up a glinting silver weapon, the ghost pushed it against her face. She began to bleed even more, her whole figure now a deep, dirty crimson. She kept struggling, the net that bound her cutting her even more. Then she lay still, emitting her final breath. A pale silver mist rose from her bloodred mouth, a mist that materialized into the figure of a woman, beautiful and whole once more.

It Really is Autumn now...

It is autumn. For sure. Why? The garden is gone. The tomatoes and carrots and brocolli and cucumbers and sweet basil and watermelon and all the other veggies we had in our garden. We pulled everything out. The good thing is the "end of season harvest." All the stuff that hasn't ripened completely yet we picked. But the mose exciting thing... SWEET POTATOES!! My dad and I secretly bought three sweet potato seedlings and planted them in between the tomotoes and the peppers. Halfway through the summer I let slip that they wer sweet potatoes to my mom. Anyway, we dug them up and we have TONS! So many! And so good! My mom made her delicious dish, sliced sweet potaotes, sliced apples, granola, raisins, brown sugar, everything baked. We still have some more sweet potatoes left for another time.

Saturday, October 10, 2009

Help?

I need your advice. Presently I have no time to write my novels, at ALL. Too much homework, etc. Does anyone have any advice about getting some more time to write?

Thursday, October 8, 2009

The Sun Never Settles

raconteur (n.) a person who exceeds in telling anecdotes

The raconteur was an elderly man who lived in a ramshackle cottage with a crooked fence and a giant elm towering overhead. A scruffy, limping mutt and three bony hens called the overgrown yard attached to the house home. That could also be said for the man, whose graying, silver hair and beard was hard to spot amidst the long forgotten hedges and roses. Only his piercing, kindly blue eyes- miraculously bright and eager for a man of his age- set him apart from the world of green surrounding him.
In a crumbling barn set off in the distance, a rusted bridle was hung on a metal hook, long grimy and dusted with mist, sorrow, and lore from the ages. Its well-worn leather blended into the ancient wood of the walls. All that set it apart was an infrequent glimmer of light and of hope, before the rising sun escaped into the shadows. The birds looked upon the barn with hope, wondering when its unsightly figure on the horizon would crumble into absolute nothingness.
The man would sit on a creaking bench, nearly as old as the man himself, amidst a tangle of rose petals and blueberry bushes. Stepping stones that spread across the garden were barely visible beneath the messy gnarled vines that snaked through the garden, then coiled onto the cottage, holding its weakened walls upright. To even the casual passersby, it seemed obvious that without the endless support of the weed, the slight building would have been lost to the elements long decades ago.
This raconteur would never have a care in the world. He would sit, solemn and lonely, in complete solitude, and tell stories to the earth, to the wind, the stars and the soaring birds. His wise words would carry through the rushing air, till they reached the spiral of ideas that falls upon each of us. Some would carry even farther, dreams in the night sky, and whisper themselves to the sun and the moon. And all the while the man would sit, quietly, and speak with the wisdom of the ages, of those who had gone before, of those who cannot bring themselves to tell the world, of those who never had a chance to explain their thought and their actions. He spoke of days gone by, and pondered the reasons for sorrow, for happiness, for guilt and destruction. His wise words would reach the ears of each of us. Whether or not we listen is up to us, yet the man still speaks. The entire world is for us and up to us, he tells us. The sun is our friend, and the moon our teacher, the provider of wisdom. War is the way of the demons, and a simple act of peace can change the earth. Respect the world, the seas, the forests. The sky and the water are one. We are one, and never doubt that you are beloved and sacred to the beings of the world.
His wise words endure for centuries, for millenia, for eons. They spread across oceans and skies, across planets and throughout the universe. The words of the raconteur are sacred truths. Even when he leaves this earth, his words will still echo throughout. And the barn will collapse with a resounding thud, scattering the birds and freeing the few phrases trapped inside.

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

I'd like to share a funny picture I took...


This summer I went to Starved Rock State Park in Utica IL and this sign was on a gas station there. I thought I'd snap a picture of it. Tell me what you think of it.

Tag!

I was tagged by Cassie !!

What is a very interesting fact about you?
I like doing magic tricks!

     What are two things in this world that you love very much?
Dogs and writing.

     What is the last thing you ate?
Animal crackers from the school lunch.

     Who is your favorite book/movie character?

Tamar from the book Tamar
     What is your favorite color?

Deep, rich blue

     Are you random?
I guess you could say so. Sometimes at least... :)

    Do you have a totem animal?
Depeneds what a totem animal is. If its a beloved stuffed horsie then yes I do.

    How many people follow your main blog?
Just 5 so far.

   What is your favorite animal?
Either a dog, a squirrel, a black-capped chickadee, or maybe a goat. Or a chicken. Or a horse.

VS.

    Down-Hill or Cross-country skiiing?
Um.. I think it's downhill that I always do.

    Soda or water?
Water. A no-brainer. Soda tastes like a regurgitated gut.

   Weekends vs. school days?
I guess weekends because Saturday night is like relaxtion time for me.

    Trees or flowers?
Hard one. I love both. But I think flowers because I absolutely love zinnias!
  
NORMAL QUESTIONS

     What is your favorite movie?
 Ile Wazy Kon Trojanski. It's Polish but in English it means "How much does the trojan horse weigh" Its about a woman who goes back in time to save her grandma and find her present husband earlier.

     What is your favorite book?
It's always changing, but presently "Tamar"

     How long have you been on Blogger for?
Since February but this I've had this blog since August.

    Who are you going to tag?
Mimi and Marissa.  


Tuesday, October 6, 2009

The Best Donuts EVER!!

Okay some of you may consider this a late post, this happened on Sunday, but I absolutely have to share. My family went on our annual apple picking trip to Oriole Springs in Twin Lakes, Wisconsin. It is more like on the Illinois/Wisconsin border. Anyway, their apples are amazing and it is so fun to pick them and then eat them. Unfortunately this year because of my braces I was unable to devour the usual amount of six or more apples. Instead, two were consumed, using my dad's penknife that I was secretly hiding at the same time so no one would kick us out. Thankfully nothing happened. It was torture to see so many delicious apples being eaten by everone but me and have to cut mine up into the tiniest bite-size pieces imaginable. We also picked our own pumpkin. This is the first year we have done this but it was only three dollars for a HUGE pumpkin. Most of the ones in the patch were covered with disgusting beetle-like bugs.
Of course after we payed 67 dollars for our three big bags and one small bag of apples(big= 18 bucks each, small= 10 bucks) we drove to Harvest Time. Apple cider, hot dogs, cheese, etc is available for purchase. You can buy apple from the orchard, meat, and all sorts of stuff. A collection of Nigerian goats, turkeys, ducks, and lambs are congregated behind the main buildings. Some of the goats were available for sale. There were hay bales for climbing, a swing set for the tiny tykes, and some unsightly porta-potties. While my brother, my dad and I went to see the animals my mom stood in line for the donuts. A very LONG line. You take a paper, fill it out, stand in line to hand in the paper, pay, then wait until they make the donuts and give them to you. You can see them make the donuts from the store. Seven fifty for a dozen. Those warm donuts are absolute tongue bliss! Even two days later it is impossible to believe that a better tasting donut exists. Delisiously crafted.... mmm.....

Monday, October 5, 2009

A Spark of Inspiration

All of those daybooks I've seen on various blogs as well as a recent post on A Peek Into My Life inspired me. I've decided to make a daybook of sorts of my own. Once I actually come up with it I'll make a post.

Today

The nineteenth day of seventh grade. Perhaps that means something significant. Perhaps not. Perhaps it is a day of stomach aches. Perhaps a day of anguish over forgetting homework, then forgetting that you forgot the homework that you never forgot(aka not really forgetting it). Perhaps a day of wishing for a dog or wanting to eat your BFF's mom's delicious onion rings and mashed potatoes. Or perhaps two of the above. You have a minute to guess which 2 of the above "perhap's" are really true and did happen and which did not. Joking... although I wouldn't mind you guessing.
Today was a day of finding out that my two Cs had risen up to an A and a B. A day of wanting (SPOILER ALERT!) onion rings and mashed potatoes. And a day of stomach aches. Plus a day of emotion and wanting to sleep forever. A day of remebering Saturday's shopping trip(I got 2 amazingly cute fancy dress tops and other stuff). A day of staring and talking and laughing and a million other things. A day of coming up with a FANTASTIC comparison between dogs and the Red Death, and cats and Prince Prospero. From Edgar Allan Poe's "The Masque of the Red Death." A perfect idea for an article.

He jumped off the orange bike and threw it aside in a rush. Huffing with all his earthly might he crashed past Audrey and plowed through the group of people that had congregated before the scene of the accident. An accident that he helped to create. The blood, the screams, the horrid destruction was vivid before his eyes. The bloodred body of the girl who may never move again. The orange bike stained with crimson that was the major evidence of his guilt. His eyes refused to let the horrendous flashback stop playing over and over again. The screeching of the tires and the piercing shriek of terror. The worlds of so many people being destroyed, all so quickly, so suddenly, so unexpectedly and abruptly. Without a second's thought. Lives being lost. Lives being taken away so casually and quickly, as though they were only a borrowed pencil. A pencil taken away from a young school girl, never to be returned. Stolen. Stolen lives, stolen thoughts, stolen actions. All gone forever from those who needed them most. Gone, never to return.

Sorry about that. Inspiration struck so I just wrote. Not the article I was talking about, by the way.
Thanks for reading.
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